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Bob Dylan
« on: March 17, 2017, 01:35:35 PM »
Hey all I wrote an intentional dylan like song, or tried at least.  Was hoping for some input.  Thanks in advance and go big blue.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0aOnqtrNrGc

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Re: Bob Dylan
« Reply #1 on: March 17, 2017, 02:38:07 PM »
Nice! Post the lyrics.

Did you do the vocals, harp and the AG?


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Re: Bob Dylan
« Reply #2 on: March 17, 2017, 02:58:14 PM »
Yeah man:


Towards Societies underworld
the forgotten ribbon streets
where living is the exception
in the land of outnumbered feet

there capitalisms cruelty is seen
ragged clothes covered with scars
of those whose fuel is bourbon
grinding like broken cars

There eyes let them see clear
the armani suits of navy blue
where children of better coincidence
have privlidge over those they rule

Violet sunrays fill their skies
reflecting off their cardboard
deluded by being down and out
they long ago fell on the sword

in a country full of riches
and wealth beyond dreams
the poor are left to imagine
what equality must mean

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Re: Bob Dylan
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2017, 03:46:12 PM »
Yeah man:


Towards Societies underworld
the forgotten ribbon streets
where living is the exception
in the land of outnumbered feet

there capitalisms cruelty is seen
ragged clothes covered with scars
of those whose fuel is bourbon
grinding like broken cars

There eyes let them see clear
the armani suits of navy blue
where children of better coincidence
have privlidge over those they rule

Violet sunrays fill their skies
reflecting off their cardboard
deluded by being down and out
they long ago fell on the sword

in a country full of riches
and wealth beyond dreams
the poor are left to imagine
what equality must mean

Hopefully you're not like me, editing endlessly until it resembles nothing like the original which was the best to begin with. 
"There is a greater purpose...that purpose is team. Winning, losing, playing hard, playing well, doing it for each other, winning the right way, winning the right way is a very important thing to me... Championships are won by teams who love one another, who respect one another, and play for and support one another."
~ Coach Tom Coughlin

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Re: Bob Dylan
« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2017, 03:49:34 PM »
You write?

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Re: Bob Dylan
« Reply #5 on: March 17, 2017, 04:02:41 PM »
Not lately. I need to be inspired. Nothing is ever truly finished to my satisfaction.
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~ Coach Tom Coughlin

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Re: Bob Dylan
« Reply #6 on: March 17, 2017, 05:03:47 PM »
Welcome aboard Blake. Nice piece.

Glad you bring some much needed musical talent to this uninspired Front Porch.    :ok: :ok: :ok: :ok: :ok: :ok:

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Re: Bob Dylan
« Reply #7 on: March 17, 2017, 05:38:59 PM »
Ill trade it all for a super bowl.  Got to sure up the OL and were ready baby.